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splithorizon
September 20th, 2006, 04:23 AM
Hello, my name is Gilles...I love to dream and draw.
I have a college diploma in fine arts, and a certificate for
introduction to 3d art.

Here are a few pencil sketches and a couple watercolors to
give you a small sample of my work.

Good to be here.

more.... at http://trashstock.net

Seedling
September 20th, 2006, 06:50 AM
Hello, welcome to conceptart.org! This is the Critique Center. Typically only one piece of art is posted here at a time. Perhaps a sketchbook would be a better place to show multiple pieces of art.

splithorizon
September 20th, 2006, 03:36 PM
ok thnx for the headsup...

Jason Rainville
September 20th, 2006, 06:04 PM
Just an overall crit: you should probably move away from pencil as your 'finishing medium' and find something else for making your professional pieces. Pencil is great for sketches but I find it very hard to work with in leter stages of development... among other things...

My opinion is 'good for learning, not for work'

Looks like you need a bit of work with faces and hands (there's an Andrew Loomis book specifically for that, so if you can find a pdf of it you're set) and the last painting really lacks depth. Gotta get some contrast to push some things forward and back.

Good to have you :)