character:the heart on the hand

[bison]

Photoshop 7
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Bison

[krayz]

The shadow looks too 'straight on'.. like it's not following the angle of the wall... like you've just copied the girl layer.. painted it black and moved it back and up a little. Also the shadow's edges are too sharp.

The light cast from the window doesn't convince me either.. again the edges are too sharp and none of the window panes' shadows seem to be showing on the girl.

Another thing that bothers me is the red highlight on her hair, the top of her arm and her back.. where is that light coming from?

However, I think what really kills the pic is far too much black.

Just my honest opinions.