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Forge
June 6th, 2003, 06:52 AM
It's not an usual subject here but why not!!!
http://fgrillaud.free.fr/images/juju.jpg
Carnifex
June 6th, 2003, 07:11 AM
ehhh...no,it looks too "mature" for a child...but i can't tell exactly how to change it:huh:
Forge
June 6th, 2003, 08:37 AM
aïe... another one can help me ?
JoShuA
June 6th, 2003, 10:19 AM
it's too Flat. the Forehead and cheek area need more depth, as well as the eyes add some highlites. the lips are very two dimensional as well, and look like there in a weird spot , to far away from the nose, but ey maybe thats what the child looks like.
The hand looks righ as far as shape but could be fleshed out much more. as well as the hair. Just needs better lightiing all around
maybe give some depth to the eyelids. and eye lashes
the nose looks good as far as shape just like the hand. but if the hand wasn't there I could mistake this for some one a bit older.maybe make the eyes bigger and nose smaller.

I understand it's a wip. keep posting, I'd like to see how it turns out.

:D
Forge
June 7th, 2003, 05:01 AM
ok joshua thanks for your advices only one thing the child upper lip is super fine and he is sticking out !!! I know it's flat but as you say It's only a wip I'm workin on it...:chug: