"To Die" comic pages

[vegetasonac]

http://www.adamcline.com/comicbooks/todie/todieinanelevator.jpg

http://www.adamcline.com/comicbooks/todie/todieinyoursleep.jpg

These are just experiments of one pagers for my future 92pg comic. theyre my first serious attempts at sequentials so i really really would appreciate some crits on them. thanks :)

[Kortez]

Really nice storytelling through images and panel placement.

This does not like a first time sequential art, you don't rely on the speech to come the story across in them, and that's a big plus. Like I said, does NOT look like it's your first serious attempt. Funny and well done.

Good job!

[darkcult]

Oh man, the second one is:D ,
I just love it!!!!

[vegetasonac]

thanks guys for the kind remarks!

kortez: ah man im so glad to hear someone say that about my art telling the story and not the words. im glad you typed that again cuz i almost couldnt believe my eyes, i thought it was a typo lmao! :D i really try to emphasize the art showing the story, cuz i think that's what really seperates the pros from the amateurs.

darkcult: heh im glad you like it, just an idea that popped into my head while at work, same goes for that elevator one too lol

[syntax]

These are amazing! Solid work. You must be a natural at sequential story-telling.


Cheers matey,
syn

[vegetasonac]

ah thanks syntax for that awesome comment! I guess constantly reading comic books as a kid paid off :D

[stutte]

LOVE EM! i wanna see more!! LOTS more!!

[vegetasonac]

ah you shall you shall. Whenever i get some spare time I'll be doing more "To Die" comics at random times. But I'm currently working on a 92 page comic called Gamble Symphony which is a solo project, so it'll take a while to complete it! but the first 14 pages will be free on my website as soon as i am finished each page. *shameless plug* heh