Kerrigan's Last Stand

[supremedarkling]

I've been working on many projects for the Blizzard Fan Art contest, and this is one of them. I've spent about 9 hours coloring this and I think am at a point that I am unsure of where I should go, and what I should work on. Any suggestions or critiques would be greatly appreciated.

[johanson]

One thing you could work on is creating a sense of depth in the piece. Right now everything is reading in the mid-ground. Try separating the picture into three levels in your head: foreground, middle, and background. Then ask yourself what you can do to visually pop those layers out from each other. We know that Kerrigan is screwed from the story, but the picture isn’t showing us just how screwed she is. Maybe some nasty silhouetted bugs in the foreground could create the feeling of being surrounded.

Just some thoughts. I hope you’ll post this again when you’re all finished.

-andrew

[supremedarkling]

Actually there are a bunch of places I could put in zerg sillouettes.....Thats a really good suggestion! thanks =)

[AtariWG]

Is her right leg in a quad stretch position? Seems to interfere a bit with the rocks... it almost looks like her knee is resting on them but I think perhaps you meant them to be behind her. Light blue leg panel on her left thigh seems like it could curve a bit more around her leg too.

[TencoKenco]

I think the dust around her legs ruins the style you were going for and blocks the background making it 2 unclear to the viewer
my 10 cents