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Grendel
June 5th, 2003, 10:11 AM
Page 1
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/plots1.jpg

Page 2
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/plots2.jpg

page 3

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/plots3.jpg

page 4

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/plots_to_page_4.jpg

page 1 variant


http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/variant_page_1.jpg


Its ok , any one have suggestions- the only thing i s it doesnt really show my skill for drawing perspective or people, Im thinking they want to see a various amount of things with these submissions.
Laconic
June 5th, 2003, 01:50 PM
Dont restrict the "camera" angle to just pointed straight at the grave from infront. Thats my thoughts, bring it down towards the grave, and end up in front of the grave stone.

But then i know nothing.

Laconic.
Grendel
June 6th, 2003, 10:18 AM
pencils...trying to see if this works as the final version of pg1 in the proteus series. The cemetary scene on on pg 2 now

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/mockpg1.jpg
tegehel
June 6th, 2003, 05:43 PM
aaah I love p.4 the way it is, very sketchy, yet has a lot of character, neato!

C.
Carnifex
June 7th, 2003, 05:28 AM
it's very good indeed,but if you ask me the text in the first piece was more appealing
also the thing with the gravestone wasn't that bad,just set the camera angle a bit different when focusing first:)
Goo
June 7th, 2003, 08:07 AM
how many pages is this gonna be?

it looks good, and try some change of views. but 1 important thing to note is that dont try to do too many splash pages. only do them when you are emphasising a point or do it to show the scale of whats going on,etc, not on some small scenes..