hunting

[El Chief]

painter 7, tried not so much rendering this time :)
c&c welcome

http://www.godlessbeauty.de/gallery/hunting.jpg

[z3r0]

Damn, this piece deserves to be commented on.

Good lightning, it gives a warm feel to it, the only thing that bothers me a bit is the girls right shoulder.

Other than that, great job.

[Fipse]

The lighting and the environment is really good! Personally I´m laways too lazy for environment so I always like a good one ;).

There are some flaws in the girl I can see. First at all the right shoulder that is too big. Check the measurement between shoulder and the armpit and you will see what I mean. Furthermore there are some problems in the lower body area that seems overall too long - the legs appear for this reason quite short. Another thing that bothers me - and that is maybe connected with the too long lower body - are the too long forearms.

A last thing I want to comment are the feet/shoes. They seemto be not in perspective with the ground and because - as I suppose - there should be a stronger shadowing they seem to float or hover over the ground and let the figure seem to be pasted on.

Hope this could help you. I suppose after a few anatomical adjustments this could be a really fine drawing.

Fipse

[El Chief]

@z3r0
thx, you`re right with her shoulder

@Fipse
thx, too. somebody on eatpoo already mentionend the lower body area, so i shortened it...obviously not enough. the idea was, that she leans forward to watch something below her. i had no photo ref this time. her left foot seems to be alright, i guess the problem is with her right foot.
i will shorten everything tomorrow.

i appreciated your comments as always

thx & greets

[BluePencilArtist]

Lighting job kick ass!!
:chug:

[El Chief]

@BluePencilArtist
thx man :)

i shortened her forearms and worked on her stance again...hope it's better now