View Full Version : Travel girl
September 13th, 2006, 01:36 PM
She gets never lost...
September 13th, 2006, 02:45 PM
Really cute. Who would'nt want to pick up such an adorable hitchhiker?
2 things. in the background, the black outline in the dirttrail is a bit too harsh. I think you could do without it. And for a young girl her breasts may be just a little bit too low. But those are entirely nitpicky. I think it's a great image. Simple and cute.
/edit: I checked out your website. Some nice stuf there, too. Especially the guy and girl walking into the classroom
September 13th, 2006, 03:00 PM
Yes indeed, she is quite cute.
Got to say, though, that left arm isn't reading as great as it could because of the foreshortening problem.
Hope you get it fixed, 'cause it's a cute piece.
September 14th, 2006, 09:10 AM
hey dude... good job!!
the athmosphere is nearly perfect for comic style but the background seems to be very near... if there were a blue fog over the mountains it might looks more like a background...
her pants .... i donīt like the shading, its not very authentic ... doesnīt look like folds more than paper or smth.
ok and the main point... the cars drive from right to left (right?).
wouldnīt it better if her hair waves to the left?
ok this is my crit 4 today... nice pic i like it!
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