WIP - Warrior

[Dreamed-Reality]

Hey, it's been a long time since I've posted anything on this forum, so I thought I might as well post a WIP to be seriously critiqued.

Anyway, just letting you guys know, I haven't used a reference for this piece, so everything is coming straight from my head, and I'm sure (as has been pointed out) that there are things wrong with the picture, but that's why I'm posting. To get help!

Here's the picture

http://home.attbi.com/~sinemesis/artwork/warrior2.jpg

Here's a timeline on what I've done

http://home.attbi.com/~sinemesis/artwork/abs.jpg
http://home.attbi.com/~sinemesis/artwork/warrior1.jpg
http://home.attbi.com/~sinemesis/artwork/warrior.jpg

Please critique, because man, I need it.

[Dreamed-Reality]

http://home.attbi.com/~sinemesis/artwork/warrior3.jpg

I've changed his abs so they look more convincing, have a looksee, since no one has replied

/me shakes fists!!!