b5's sketchbook(updated 10/11/04) look at the last page

[behemot5]

i don't like the texture of pics when i scan them
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/271.jpg
Due to a problem with deviantart, i must found a new host and delete several pics. The last drawings i drawn are posted in this thread from another host and are situated in pages 2 and 3...
sorry for this problem...

31/08/04 (more on last page)
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0050.JPG

[Hunger_Artist]

not bad.. personally I think you limit yourself by drawing on graph-paper. It may help you keep proportion but it may also decrease the energy of your lines.

[behemot5]

I will try to paint it with photoshop...the main problem is that i have absolutely no idea of the colour of the background....the seat will be red..wears will be black and the skin will be pale ...
bigger size (http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/nomorepain.jpg) http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/large/indyart/freehand/nomorepain.jpg

[golgari]

those last ones are definately an improvement over the first ones...i especially like the way you define the shapes surrounding the figures... but maybe you're overdoing the contour-lines a bit...especially on the last drawing, it seems a bit over the top...

[golgari]

the lower part of the hand looks really good! i especially like the way you textured the arm with those strokes and your shading of the hand...also the vessels came out really well!
the two folded fingers look also very good, the two who are stretched at are a little bit flawy, though. the outline on the lower right side of the middle finger is still pretty disturbing,
and i think that the index finger can't be in a position like you drew him, can he? he's bowed too much to the left.
also, he's to thin at the top, i think. this strangely seems to be a common mistake. i saw the same mistake two days ago on this board...also, what's that thing touching the fingers? i can't make it out at all, sorry...
concerning your deformed figure, i think it would have been better if you didn't make the end of the first head and the lower contour line of the second head the same...an overlapping of the heads would have created a more 3dimensional feel, i think. plus, the carotid of the second head stops to fast...a smoother transition between this and the rest of the body might have better incorporated the second head...
the environmental scene is quite nice. something bothers me about the stone, but i can't really tell what it is. you didn't take care to keep in with the fading line at the top when you faded out the roof, but that's no big deal...
go on! :)

[behemot5]

...golgari, i admit you're right i didn't take care of some details...fingers are not good and i mustn't add the second head....i will try not to rebegin those sorts of mistakes....
....I must work more to increase volume and some parts of my winged dragon....

[behemot5]

try to colorize one of them

[golgari]

hey, that winged dragon looks really great!
yeah, the legs are a bit out of shape (they're better in the colored version, yet i think that the right leg - as viewn from me - is a bit too thin), but it doesn't really bother me. the head is so cool =)
i don't like the colored version that much yet...which is probably because of my affectiveness to blackwhite-sketches and because your coloured pic is still in a strong work-in-progress-state, but also because of that fireburst, with which you killed the tongue of the beast, which i think was really a very neat addition, it made the beast so unique...

[behemot5]

better like this?
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/trytrytrytrytry4.jpg

[golgari]

yep, i think it's kind of an improvement.
the tongue's still not really visible, though. i think for that you would have to move the fireburst a little bit up...which is probably kinda hard now ;)
the fireburst looks pretty cool now, much better than in the picture before. generally i'd say be careful with those photoshop-filters, though (you used one, didn't you?) concerning it's body and it's legs it looks a little strange now the upper edge of the wings against the background looks a little strange, too. and those green highlights on it's chests stand out a bit too much right now, i'd think.
however, keep us posted about the development :)

[golgari]

the torso looks better now. don't know which color scheme i like better, but this one's for sure nice as well.
the background looks a bit strange...i'd say the part over his wings and the part under him are too different from each other, one can't really imagine they're actually the same sky...

[adien]

hey behemot5, love your sketches, although i agree that you could soften the outlines a bit. makes the outline of your drawings stand out a bit too much from the rest of the drawing as it is now i think.

i like your winged dragon sketch, but i don't like the colored versions that much, mostly because the sketch looks 3 dimensional, but in the paintings, you've painted over some of the most important aspects that made it look 3d. the paintings look pretty flat.
for example, if you look at the head in the sketch, it's pretty broad, fairly flat, and you can see a hint of the other side of the head at the top. also there is a ridged but fairly soft transition between the side of the head and the neck. in your painting, you've made it fairly steep and narrow, and you can no longer see anything of the other side of the head, and there is no longer a transition between the head and the neck on the side. one stops and the other begins.

great works, keep em coming. :)

[behemot5]

thanks for your comments golgari and adien ...that's right the sky is odd... and i don't know if i must rebegin the entire draw or do something else...and that is also tru that painting is flat.... i try to learn but it 's not very easy to learn alone ...:-/..... i will try to give more volume.....:(.... thanks a lot

[behemot5]

what do you think of it???boring or not? awfully drawn?a lake of something??...and why???i really want to increase my way of drawing
thanks a lot
a big leg and only one leg and one arm for this one but i wanted to give a lot of contrast and volume on this one

[golgari]

wow...they all look really good.
the only thing i can say about it concerns the first drawing...his head "contours"...the remarkable shapes of the head look a little off. it looks a little bit like you first drew the head shape without any of them and then put them in later, but didn't really put them in the right way...can you follow me? ;)

[behemot5]

the first??? the which one??? the guy with a skirt??or the one with wings?

[golgari]

the guy with the wings, and the long hair, which is hanging to just one side...

[behemot5]

i see what is the problem golgari, that's true the face is a little bit odd... here is two sketches drawn today

[behemot5]

new sketches drawn quite quickly...i tried to eliminate mistakes i usually done (strong outlines and no volumes)

[adien]

i love the turtle heads. very nicely drawn. :)

i definately like your drawings that don't have the heavy outline, it makes the drawing more 3-dimensional. the creature doesn't end at the edges, it wraps around the back. the drawings that have the heavy outline are given very distinct boundaries, which i think fights with 3-dimensional feeling of the shading in the interior of the drawing.

keep em coming. :beer:

[behemot5]

thanks for your comment adien....here is the last one i drawn
i hope it's good

[behemot5]

here is the last i drawn, i didn't try to work on shadow, i only wanted to work shapes and to create a good ship...
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/221.jpg

[killing.people]

i like your more recent works. you are a very talented artist.

[behemot5]

thanks for your kind words KillingP... i try to become better...
from the which one do you think it's better ??????

[killing.people]

i like the two on july 14th the most.

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/231.jpg

[metaphysiks]

in repsonse to the post in july 14th. i really really really love the torsos on those characters. i can see that you are improving. keep it up
meta

[behemot5]

wow ....a post from a very good drawer full of idea...
thanks for your words meta....i continu to work ... so i will try to take care of details like those ones......:p

[behemot5]

a new one drawn after seeing "spaceball" from mel brooks
http://images.deviantart.com/i/7/8/3/spaceball.jpg
perhaps any comments?

[metalwinds]

nice stuff, a lot of the robotics and such are really nice. i dig the spaceships too. some of the anatomy could use some work, but lookin good all in all. keep it up

peace

[behemot5]

i tried to copy a paint of caravage and i think i learned a lot of thinks i will use on nexts pictures......
thanks a lot

[behemot5]

http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/i/9/3/1/anothersketch16.jpg
drawn this morning...
bigger size (http://images.deviantart.com/i/b/f/c/anothersketch17.jpg)

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/261.jpg

[endregan]

i really like your latest sketches. every line seems to have a direction and works well together. crazy concepts I like them.

[behemot5]

thanks for your kind words endregan....I have the impression that these pictures are not appreciated by a lot of persons ( very few response) perhaps do you know what is wrong on these ones???
i ask it 'cause i want to become better..

[behemot5]

http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/i/5/8/7/anothersketch19.jpg
bigger size (http://images.deviantart.com/i/5/8/7/anothersketch19.jpg)

[endregan]

hehe behemoth I have a daily sketch thread too and sometimes you wont get response for a couple of days, just hang in there people will come they are busy sometimes too :).

or drawing of course !! :)

My suggestion, just dont give up!!

[StephenC]

wow some pretty nice things you have in here. really like the rendering and designs. It really looks like you're on the brink of greatness,

also if you're not getting that many replies don't sweat it. It might be that your work is too good so people are speechless, plus there's just a lot of work here on the board so it takes some time to get thru them all. In my own sbook..it usually takes about 50- 100 views before i get a reply no big deal.

[behemot5]

I'm worry because i'm asking myself if it's due to a bad quality of drawing...if my drawing are boring....I understand sometime people prefer not to crit .... i do the same with some drawers 'cause i think i have poor knowledge....anyway when i draw during one hour on a pic i don't see some mistakes that anybody can see when they discover the pic...
in one word" thanks" for your comments stephenc and endregan.....

[Sammy]

I really like where you're going with your technology designs... the ships and the cyborgs..
I think if you experemented with them in another media you could bring them out and make them more dynamic..

A lot of them would look good if you traced the linework onto a separate piece of paper and markered them

[behemot5]

lake of life
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/301.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/321.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/311.jpg
hope that deviantart will work .....

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/271.jpg

[Sammy]

That last robot/mech is straight outa the 80's .. I love it! you GOTTA color that one some neon grean with a lenseflaired horizon in the background with a pink grid! HA!

awesome

[endregan]

hehehe what sammy said.

love that lion sketch too its crazy cool.

nice work

[behemot5]

....huhum....coloured verion...yes ..why not :D ...
i think it will be very difficult... i will try to do this :p ..
thanks endregan and sammy

[behemot5]

drawn this one when the teacher were speaking and boring me....:rolleyes:
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/331.jpg

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/3311.jpg

[endregan]

haha retro awesome man

[behemot5]

thanks endregan...i tryed to increase volume and contrast... i hope this one is better..
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/3312.jpg

[behemot5]

drawn this.. not really work on the shape but more on the rendering ...i hope it's good
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/341.jpg

[rubygenesis]

ooOOo i like that last post, nice shading cool robut design. keep'em coming Buddy ;)

[metalwinds]

dont worry too much about people not critiquing.. ..i feel the same way about my stuff most of the time... .just keep drawin and draw even more than you have been.. .thats how you get better.. draw, draw, draw. ive found that my work also gets better when i take a chance.. ..most of your stuff is fairly similar (in materials and subject matter), so try something different, something new. youll learn a lot from the new experiences and the kind of work you do now will be that much better.. and you never know.. you might find another medium that you are really good with. just keep at it and keep postin.. .i ll be lookin.

peace

[behemot5]

waow... rubygenesis and metalwinds...thanks for your replies...i don't post a lot on your pics but i always look them and apprciate them..sincerally...
metalwind : i think you're right and i try several mediums...oil paintings, pastels, color pencils, digital...i'm not very good with them but i will continu to look and try..
ruby genesis : buddy...:cuddle: :p

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/351.jpg
don't have a lot of time to experiment this time...happy to go back to school art evening cours for the second year...i will try to find more support and more medium...

[TARGETE]

behemot5,

These are good, I'm sorry your not getting the crits you like, hopefully I can change that a little :). Looking at your drawings you have a wonderful touch and your line and rendering are superb. Your concepts are great too I love imaginative sketches.

When I first started drawing I was basically a renderer, thats all I loved to do I totally left out the basics of drawing and structure and anatomy. Your beyond that point but my advice to you would be to draw as much from refrence as you do from your imagination 50/50. You will be amazed and so will others at your improvement of your imaginative sketches.

J.P.

[Robolus]

:thumbsup: You have some REALLY nice things going on in here. Great concepts and pencil technique! :waves:

[behemot5]

thanks robulus and target for your comments... i'm really happy having comments from good artists...i like your works a lot...
target : i tried drawing with references several time, the only problem is that i don't have photography or model to draw from...(sometime i kidnap friends to photography them ) but the main problem is that i don't have any idea when i work so i asking myself how you have inspiration for general posture and more specially on details like this pic...
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?s=&postid=104929

[TARGETE]

target : i tried drawing with references several time, the only problem is that i don't have photography or model to draw from...(sometime i kidnap friends to photography them ) but the main problem is that i don't have any idea when i work so i asking myself how you have inspiration for general posture and more specially on details like this pic...

Behemot5,

You can download or find many pictures on the internet..or you can find a muscle fitness magazine or any thing that has pictures in it and draw from that. Drawing from life is the best but if you dont have models use your self and look in the mirror.

That pic your refering to I had no refrence materials basically a pose out of my head and added detail, I've been doing it a long time since I was 5. I'm still improving and I will post my progress. It takes practice alot of practice and many mistakes.

J.P.

[behemot5]

thanks for your help target...here is something i drawn from ref... i think it's really boring.... absolutely no creation on thisone...i try to create something with it..
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/361.jpg

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/371.jpg
continu to work on this pix...not really crazy...but i'm quite happy on shapes and render...

[behemot5]

it seems my pictures are not"living" at all.... from what is it due to????wrong anatomy????light??expression????technique???

[Dan.v.D.]

you´re no camera.
u can decide what you want to show with your images.
decide which lines to show and how bold.
decide where to lead the focus by sharpness and contrast.
dramatize through considered simplification.

[behemot5]

finally tried painting... first painting and first from life...
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/DCP_0958.JPG

[metalwinds]

keep painting/drawing from life/reference. the more you do it, the more you will understand about the figure and lighting and etc. i just set a goal for myself where i have to draw from reference for at least 1 hour a day.. . ..try doing something like that to keep you motivated because the more motivated you are, the more you will learn when you draw because you will be retaining the information.

peace

[siskol p]

as for the full figures, you have a really nice sense of light and shadow, i'd just say you need to work on your foreshortening and limbs in perspective more.

your renderings are really nice, but i feel like your illustrative work tends to get muddy and greyed out unlike the tank tread rendering and the fire tattoo spike guy one, which i think have an entirely different visual vocabulary say to the one at the top of the page with the skeleton hand. but more doodling from life and reference (which you are good at) will help that out with the quickness

[behemot5]

i think i have a problem in my technic... it seems it's boring even for ma drawing teacher...don't understand what is the problem... he tell me about drawing more flat....
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/DCP_0958888.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/DCP_0959.JPG it seems this one is slackness (i am not sure about the translator....)

[behemot5]

drawn this few days ago
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/42.jpg
any problems on this one??? technic??contrast???

[Hunger_Artist]

man, what happened?!?

you have gotten WAY better! your proportions rendering and style in general seems to have taken on alot more depth.

THere is a point where technical flaws can be attributed to style.. dont be afraid of making what some might consider mistakes in the interest of experimenting and discovering what makes the most sense to you as an artist

[behemot5]

thanks for this kind words hunger.... i really wanna improve and continue to work here are some "recent" pics
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-1.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-2.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-3.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-4.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-5.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-6.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-7.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/Untitled-8.jpg

[behemot5]

painted it last week looking myself in an old mirror and with light on my side....
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0039.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0038.JPG this one is older

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/martian-cop.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/ORC.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/ANGE.JPG

[liam.c]

the one above first in the post abvove at 4am is verry verry ncie
i know the feelling my stuff seem kinda boreing to me too and seem to lack life .im guessing its like any thing else at times things will click wehn u see them and say ahh yes of corse thats the way it is !so jsut keep plugin away and really look at light and things when your out side

it seems when the sun just rises and for about 1 hour befor the sun sets is the best time to really see that light verry dramatic .for many times i have seen amazing things at this time <and go out then spacificly to look >but even though i say ahhh yes there it is .. i forget some times since there is so much to see . but the forgeting times become much shorter the more i look

[liam.c]

man thease are really nice
i really liek the one that has the device in it that says police on it

i think <though im not shure> try to do more like that one ... see the angular strokes of the pencil ?, well if u stick for a bit with that type of stroke and keep in mind that each plane/surface has its own value in relation to the light u will improve greatly ... also with the more anglur lines its easer for the mind to mesure and make judgements about the relationship of each plane<and in turn each value > .. you see ? because we seem to mesure things from edge to edge ..or from the relationship of each shape with each shape<then as u go more rounded shapes become easer also , as the circle is just complex set of relationships

not shure if i got that accross , but try it out to see .. next figure u do think about the way the light hits each surface with in the figure .. each plane will have a diffrent value in relationship to the light <keep the lines angular stay away from rounded shapes for this experiment >

[Jamaludin]

wow, maybe it can be my eyes fooling me but all of a sudden your developing a style of your own, its so apparant espescially in your last pictures. Theyre are really looking good bud, just keep it on and on and on, you are evolving your drawing its obvious to see in your last drawings, good luck, your on the right path... :rendered:

[behemot5]

thanks liam.c and jamaludin...i continue to works....here some 3d pics
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/-r64t3.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/-r64444444t0058.jpg

[behemot5]

drawn this week
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0058.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0055.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0050.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0046.JPG

[maxetormer]

your pencil work is very good
if ya mange to get that same
values to your paintings, you will
be sky rocket good :D

keep posting =)

[behemot5]

thanks maxe...i don't have a lot of experience with painting so i try to learn...perhaps am i becoming quite"good " with my pen but i am still bad with my imagination...it seems you are better than I.I looked at your website and i think your pics are very original.

[maxetormer]

Dont beat yourself up man, you have a lot of talent just experiment
more, get wilder, dont let the mistakes or comments bother you,
the important thing is to get the ideas rolling, keep updating the thread
:D you are showing a lot of talent

keep it up!! the more you draw the more the ideas flow
thrust me, draw and draw and youll get anywere you desire !!!
:painting: :painting: :painting:

P. S. thanks for the nice commet about my work
:D i really apreciate it dude :D

[liam.c]

hay check out loomis creative illustration // alot of the imagionation can come out of the compistions . i dont hink for most of us imagination is quite waht we think it is .. small subtletys can lead to verry imagintive things . also as you draw and paint you will build up a vocabluary of items that will help you really explore that creative/imiagionation fully when some thing strikes you

[behemot5]

loomis?????don't know the url of this one....loomis.com???

[maxetormer]

There ya go , Loomis is the author
of the most used anatomy books
by the online CA comunity :D
read and print this:

http://elmo.academyart.edu/gallery/albums.php

http://www.fineart.sk/index.php?cat=12ther

[behemot5]

yes i remember "fineart" now.I will try to work like foster said in one of his thread.....firstly a script, secondly a pic....and i will use references with pic on this site...

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0068.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0069.JPG

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0074.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0073.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0071.JPG
......always not good.....continu to work without ref and try to improve

[behemot5]

draw this in the afternoon.... i hope it's better than the rest of my sketchbook
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/peintures_0078.JPG

[McLean]

Your stuff makes me think of IMGLUE's stuff (he's my roommate- a cool roomie i may say). If you have'nt already seen his sketchbook, you should check it out pronto- there are lots of similarities! Besides that, I'm seeing a lot of dudes, but not so many females. If you're considering this professionally, then you'll probably want to show off your knowledge of female anatomy too!

[behemot5]

I posted in my second shit book several study from natures....all with women models in short poses 5 min.....so i continu this year going to the evenig classdrawing....
here is 2 drawings i done ......http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/prout.jpg
for this one i think the leg is a shit and drapery need some work.
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/tete1.jpg
for this one, i think volume is good.... perhaps must i increase contrast....

[behemot5]

i drawn it this week.....anyway comments are appreciated
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/caca1.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/caca2.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/caca3.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/caca4.jpg

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/caca5.jpg
try to draw this.....try to increase the way of drawing human body

[behemot5]

just little drawing 5cm*3.5cm for the most little....10*6 for the biggest.....comments are always welcome.
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker1.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker2.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker3.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker4.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker5.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker6.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker7.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker8.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/marker9.jpg

[behemot5]

:yawn: i go back and continu to draw.....don't really know if i am in the good way i continu to draw anyway....
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/bonshommes.jpg

[liam.c]

haha !!!! yes you are in good way :)
its geting real serious in here :!) keep goign mate !
that thylocene looks awsum !so do alot of other stuffs :)

[behemot5]

thanks liam.....i appreciate your comments....i'll continu to draw....continu continu continu...

[behemot5]

not a sketch..... i put it it anyway...
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/finalnal.jpg

[behemot5]

done this at the evening class
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0068.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0069.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0070.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0072.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0074.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0075.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0076.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux%20arts%202_0078.JPG

[behemot5]

drawn this during the 3 weeks after........;
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0122.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0123.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0124.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0125.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0126.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0127.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0128.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0129.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0130.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/beaux-arts3_0131.JPG

[behemot5]

http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/crane.jpg paper with a texture i dislike
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/bonhomme.jpg non-ref nude...

[behemot5]

:S ??really??? :^^;: i worked without ref, and i hoped draw a good body...it seems it's not the case....I'll continu to wrok...thanks for this comment..

[vigostar]

wow, watta huge improvement.... your going places.... keep up the good work..

[behemot5]

icey : i am sorry but i don't understand very well what you mean...my english is not good enough..."i drow someone else's positions with verry few referee", Do you mean you draw someone from life but you don't take care about squeleton, muscles???

vigostar: thanks for this comment... i work hard to improve even if i have few lesson each weeks....have you got a sketchbook ????put the URL on your signature....I would like to see it....

[behemot5]

a loong time i didn't post something here....i continue to draw oftenly and here is the last ones i drawn...
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/mon%20prout%20en%20plume.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/behemot5/moi%20en%20vacance.jpg