noble party

[Carnifex]

http://www.angelfire.com/dragon/fisite/party1.jpg
http://www.angelfire.com/dragon/fisite/party2.jpg
yeah,i know they look stiff and everything,no shadows,unrealistic faces and stuff,bad clothing wrinkles,the skirt of the bound female looks idiotic...and i suck at drawing shoes:rolleyes:
but for me,i like the clean touch of the pic(s).
they are meant to be together to one story:those two fellas in the middle have "averted" those two lying there and gone to the "party" themselves.yeah well...if you wonder(which you probably don't),i brought myself into the picture,the bound guy and the large guy in the middle...atleast i tried to;)
feel free to crit:)
any colour suggestions?(even if i'm very lazy concerning this)

[Ant4d]

my suggestion would be try loosen up your hand when you draw.
it would give more life to subjects.
You have good talent, but the line is bit too stiff.
but! it is very matter of taste thing. but thats what came to my mind when I saw the pics.

[Carnifex]

yeah,i know...normally i'm more loose into drawings but if i have some good idea i often tend to make it that "clean"(and stiff) on purpose:rolleyes:
thanx anyway:)
more crits:bash: :D

[marc-pierre]

as u want to tell a story with this pic, i would try 2 get some bg in it - my suggestion besides the fact that

they look stiff and everything,no shadows,unrealistic faces and stuff,bad clothing wrinkles,the skirt of the bound female looks idiotic...and u suck at drawing shoes :p

just kiddin :D

[Carnifex]

thanx:)
more!(i need to pull everything outta your nose huh?);)







p.s.:excuse this hella stupid question but what is bg?

[Payback]

bg= background

I agree with everything above but I think you pulled some of the females off greatly.

Keep on drawing.

[Carnifex]

thank you:)

[Montross]

I agree with the other. Although they are nice and clean drawings, try putting more shadow. It would give your chracters a sence of depth instead of a "cut and paste" kinda look. The pants and areas under the arms would have a bit more shadow. Also under the jaw line. I think you have the hair and female figures down good. Great Scotts! is that a mullet on the middle guy! just kiddin:p

[Killer Napkins]

mullet..:eek:

by the way.. i was just wondering and hoping that that thing coming from the man on the right's pants is just a hand..or is he just happy to see her..

[Montross]

:eek: I swear when the post was just loading i thought I was seeing something disturbing also. Hmm maybe a slightly wrong place to put the other hand? especialy if his thumb is extendid.:confused: i could be wrong,.

[Kortez]

At first I thought the guy had a sanitary napkin hangin out his zipper (sorry :rolleyes: ) you should fix that hand, the hand shouldn't be so much forward (compared to his left hand)

I really like the females :) You just have to color them ! :D

[Killer Napkins]

well thats strange too.. i would figure hed be more excited when hes tied up like that with the women right next to him.. haha

[Carnifex]

ohh geez...:rolleyes:
thanx for the comments:)
should i erase the hand completely?