superhero

[Faye2441]

this is a drawing I did awhile back sortof half trying to do a more american comic style, sortof... I was was told there was some problems with the foreshortening, with the neck/arms/torso etc. but I'm not sure how to fix that (in future drawings) if anyone can help, that would be awesome. thank you!

http://www.faye2441.com/images/electric_fini.jpg

[Hendric VII]

Yeah, the head is a little too big, it makes her look like a toddler or small child. The costume is nice. The special effects on her hands could be less busy.

[ElDavisimo]

The proportions are off. Obviously the head, but also the arms look as if the there are no forearms, just upper arms. I understand that they are in perspective, but the are too small. Also check the way the breasts are spaced, they seem almost lopsided, but the colors are very nice.

[ElDavisimo]

This is a piece by master comic book artist Al Rio. I hope this helps
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1346/supergirlsalriogp4.jpg

[Faye2441]

Awesome, thank you very much. ^_^