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DARAF
September 7th, 2006, 12:21 PM
Quick car sketch
Adamination
September 7th, 2006, 12:48 PM
Excellent styling. I'd work on improving the front-end perspective.
Marty666
September 7th, 2006, 05:45 PM
Nice car and cool design! I'm taking the liberty to give some crits...
The environments perspective is off. Because of this the front left wheel is digging into the ground... Maybe it's breaking really hard and about to tumble?
I would not put the corner of the building in the dead center.
The shading on the door makes it look very bumped. Maybe flatten it a bit to the value on the body just behind the door...
Nice reflections on the roof and from the yelow lines!
Hope this helps.
Marty
DARAF
September 8th, 2006, 02:29 PM
Adamination and Marty,
Thanks for the advice. I'm currently taking a course on Game design and developement. My next class is on perspective. I will keep on practicing.
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camilografix
September 9th, 2006, 06:06 PM
cute car.
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