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[midknight523]

critiques needed

http://home.earthlink.net/~shadowstar523/data/pg11.jpg

http://home.earthlink.net/~shadowstar523/data/pg12.jpg

http://home.earthlink.net/~shadowstar523/data/pg13.jpg

http://home.earthlink.net/~shadowstar523/data/pg14.jpg

the 3rd page gave me a hand cramp
thanks for looking

[Sidistyk]

The 3 things that pop out to me are:

The one car, closest to us in the far right lane...As the interstate lanes push further to the right the cars should follow a tighter perspective there.

The tires on these cars are really small, like those ugly lo-pro's you see on janky honda civics in the early 90's...

Last is the face on the little girl saying "cool" something funny about those eyes. would try opening the eye more and bringing the eyebrows down a hair, its just not reading right...

final note...great stuff you got some good talent here, just keep tightening it up...

[midknight523]

thanks, man, quite a few things were bothering me about these pages and you pointed out some of them.
will rework them with your suggestions.