2 still life paintings

[probus]

hi guys,
this is my first post of artworks here. But i'm an all time lurker :). i'll post more stuff from now on

the apple is more of a speed painting though

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/probustion/apple.jpg
http://mywebpage.netscape.com/probustion/mouse.jpg

[enoc]

nice and cleanly done i really like the mouse

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[probus]

thanks mate.
any more suggestions, maybe on color?

[behemot5]

perhaps the green of the apple is a little bit too flashy on some places...??

[probus]

yes i suppose so. i was trying to get some kind of translucency by playing with saturation... oh well