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Famboozled
June 2nd, 2003, 07:06 PM
Something I did during lunchtime.

http://jawesome.net/tommy/grunt.jpg

Critique?

Mysen
June 2nd, 2003, 07:14 PM
hey i really like that. kind of subtle. makes mee feel all warm and bubble :) JK

very nice man.. only crit i would have to say is its almost a little difficult to really tell whats going on. maybe add some more contrast to it a little. punch it out

Famboozled
June 4th, 2003, 10:57 PM
Gosh... stupid finals... I havent even had time to browse the forums... thx Mysen for the comment

The pencil should be darker... but Im new to this scanning artwork thing and the school computer scanner seems to have a tendency of making things a lot brighter...

I decided I would actually try and finish this UPDATE coming soon....

Turglith
June 6th, 2003, 10:54 PM
if you have photoshop you could do Image> adjust> curves

or simpler Image> adjust> brightness contrast

that sometimes fixes scanner issues

Famboozled
June 9th, 2003, 03:24 PM
UPDATE
http://jawesome.net/tommy/grunt-mask.jpg

Famboozled
June 9th, 2003, 11:39 PM
I'm stuck...can someone help me...I am not sure whether I should continue finishing the sketch or just stop.

Lost Dragon
June 10th, 2003, 12:02 AM
I like the tube kind of thing he's got going on his chest. He looks like he could be in a dust storm or perhaps in the rotor-wash of a helicopter. Maybe you could play with those ideas?

If not, you could work on the textures of his armor (to really define what materials everything is made out of) and then just crop out what you already have. :)