Character Sketch Rendered

[Halis_Aetrous]

This was originally a full-out shaded pencil drawing I did, and I was bored today so I decided to render it, too. I'm not very expreienced with lighting effects, especially optics and tracelines. Any help or advice available would be much appreciated.

http://members.thegateway.net/jhinds/blackdusk_final.jpg

[Aikisean]

Uh, show us the pencil sketch. I think it would be best to start from there. Nice flame effects though.