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battlemonkey
June 2nd, 2003, 12:34 AM
havent drawn for a while ....
i've seen many medusas, but most of them dont do her justice. i cant help but think of jason and the argonauts, and clash of the titans...<-- goood stuff!
crits please~
http://battlemonkey.com/medusa_battlemonkey.jpg

R_M
June 2nd, 2003, 03:16 AM
Hi BM,
lovely facial expression and humanbody, it is relly well drawn and your theme choice doesn't make it one bit vulgar.
I don't know about the part where the snake tail meets the human body, I think you made her a bit to whide "hipped", but the rattle tail is so cool.
The next comment isn't really very relevant , but here it goes: I don't like that that Medusa is carring a sword, she shold be able to kick some butt without using anything but her stare, her tail and her snake hair (which you gave a lot of life)

you should colour her. and give her somekind of BG.

marc-pierre
June 2nd, 2003, 05:43 AM
nice one - like the pose, but it looks a little sketchy imho

*edit - 2 more critics:

the wrist of her left hand (without sword) looks strange, and in general her tail should be refined

krayz
June 2nd, 2003, 10:30 AM
Top half looks nice and I agree about the hand without the sword. Bottom half.. fix the tail.. as it is it just ruins what you have with the top half.

battlemonkey
June 2nd, 2003, 02:13 PM
thanks for the c&c's.
hmm... the hand w/o the sword looks kinda funny, didnt realize the wrist looked so bad. i'll fixt that!
as for the sword, ... hmm... i was trying out different weapons and such, maybe i should try a non weapon version, thanks for the ideas!
as for the snake tail... i cant seem to get it right, i tried to render out some scales, but it just makes it look worse, and ideas? and the wideness... i tried to make her sexy, and keep the curves of a woman.
:chug:
as always thanks for the crits!

Carnifex
June 2nd, 2003, 03:27 PM
if u ask me that's more than enough sexy...yeah the wrist ok...make some structure on the tail maybe and some shadows if possible...it's hard to seperate the different parts right now...
maybe you should try with a bow or sumthing?

just my 2 cents:)

thomasaurus
June 2nd, 2003, 04:40 PM
The sword could go, and In place you coould make the hands long and skeletal, menacing looking.

Other than that, really cool drawing :chug:

LeeSmith
June 2nd, 2003, 05:53 PM
I personally really like the sword (one of my favourite parts of the image) so I vote keep it. Great work on the figure but have to agree with other comments on the wrists.

sandgrain
June 3rd, 2003, 05:36 PM
i'd do her.

haha... nice twist on an old baddie.

enoc
June 3rd, 2003, 06:54 PM
awsome concept would love to see it colored

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