Critique Please - Clayfighter

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[Kortez]

Really nice. I like the color scheme. Nothing to crit except the left hand pinky finger is odd :)

Good job.

[Killer Napkins]

i love that game..very good very god

[enoc]

whoa very nicely done u got wicked skill and style

:D [TASKINLUDE] (http://active-x.net/taskinlude/) :D

[marc-pierre]

hehe - weird stuff, like very much but i think the typo is quite nasty and kills the image a little.

[Muttonhead]

I think Marc was saying that the typography was distracting, not that there was a typo, but i could be wrong. Everything is spelled correctly for sure, but I would like to see the image without the type also, or perhaps a different approach to the type.

Otherwise I think this image is really great. Very dynamic composition. The colors seem a bit muted, perhaps the oranges could be more saturated. The clowns left hand (the one grabbing the cone) is a little wonky. Also, are those the clown's feet on the left? Perhaps they could be defined a bit more so they are more recognizable as feet.

I Love the clown's face, and I really like the background as well. Nice work.


-Muttonhead

[krayz]

Loved the game and love this pic. Good job!

[behemot5]

a lot of contrast....colors are well....no parts seems flat....it's a good drawing i think (i'm not a professional at all and I think i'm not a good reference for good criticize :-p )

[marc-pierre]

as muttonhead said, i meant the word clayfighter, it looks messy somehow; show it without plz :D

[barsoom]

This is great! I wouldn't change a thing, and the little smiley pin on his suspender is a nice detail. LOVE that evil grin!!

[AmadorL]

the colors and style is wicked man.. keep'um come'n

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