Carebear Destruction

[Donkehdonk]

This is a new Comic in progress, this is the sketch for the first Comic Episode, Critiqueing would be greatly appreciated!!! Pen, 8x10 Stock:xbox:
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l265/donkehdonk/scan0003.jpg

[DFrey666]

If you are serious about this being a piece that needs critique I would first have to ask what kind of comic? For print, the web? What market is this for? Will it be an underground or counter culture comic? If you have answers to these questions, then get some money together, go down to your local comic book store, also get onto the net, and start looking at what is successful out there right now. Doesn't have to be a giant commercial success, just what has worked in the past or is working now. Take those ideas, make them your own and post another piece.

Stay Hungry

[toole]

blame canada

[Ertai]

I'm sorry, but it's kind of unclear what is going on. Perhaps you could try making the idea more clear for the average, dumb viewer (me). That would make it funnier, being too random just causes people to lack interest.Thanks, and good luck.

[Infinit]

I hope he uses this toiletpaper...

[Crane]

If this guy is serious and it isn't a joke, i'll say go for it, i've seen how much making a personnel comic and help improve your skills, though never from this point. still the tips i can give you is, make at least one or two comic pages a day as well as a ton of studies of anatomy, trees, landscapes, everything you can get your hands on.

good luck to you.