First post for me :)

[Lady_Mayev]

HI, everybody! My name is Antoana Petkova and I've just registered here :)

Here some of my works, I'd be happy if you comment on them :)
This was meant to be a cover for my comic book:
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7736/coversmallsq2.jpg

And a girl with awful legs :
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/4098/ger2haircopy7xf.jpg

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6352/elia8kb.jpg

I'm not sure if this is for here, it's a concept for a tatoo:
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/6049/garvan1lk.jpg

[Carnifex]

ok,has anyone else ever told you you need to work on anatomy and proportions? because that's your highest priority right now. even if you are influenced by anime/manga (i assume it because of your faces) you need to learn these things first. the figures show some sings of being on the right way,but you really need to study it hardcore. after that,tackle perspective,and after that,get into colour. take a good look on the tutorials section,you'll find some useful things there. for a beginning,i highly recommend this one: http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm
can't comment on the tattoo design because it's rather abstract,but it's pretty good. on that last pic of the girl i'd highly recommend a blue background instead of a red one because the girl gets lots in it otherwise.
now work it! :)

[chaosrocks]

actaully I like the tatoo design, its crisp and clear.

the figures are much as Carni has said. you need to do anaotomy studies. evey day. sketch sketch sketch

keep it up
and welcome to CA

I mostly hang out in the DSG and 3CH activities section. but feel free to PM me.
chaos rocks

[Lady_Mayev]

Carnifex, chaosrocks, thank you for the crits. I've already started working on the anatomy, I know I'm horryble with it.
This tutorial you gave me looks really nice, i'll cdefinitely check it out!
Thanks!

[John Doe]

For the first picture the girl waist looks a little flat and the guy's trenchcoat doesn't seem to flow right. I also don't like the harsh outline around the character's eyes, it makes it stand out from the rest of the face and flattens them.