Line work sketches for tattoos/flash

[sine nomine]

These are line work pieces for tattoo work, some of them have been tattooed already, some of them I might make into flash sheets, some of them I may rip up into little tiny pieces :( ...any help would be appreciated.

http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/sine_deus/snakegirl.jpg
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/sine_deus/candleskull.jpg
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/sine_deus/pirateskelly.jpg
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/sine_deus/veiledskulloutline.jpg
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/sine_deus/hummingbirds.jpg
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/sine_deus/seraph.jpg

[Serena-]

awesome line work.

I can't wait to see what you do with these (like adding color or depth). I have no crits thus far, just awesome.

[Red Mimic]

I like the way you draw your skulls, especially the 2nd one despite it having eyes (I don't like eyes in skulls).

The lack of line weight variety on the dressed up pirate skeleton makes his hand hard to see. It took me a bit to see he was dropping coins.

[sine nomine]

I agree about the lack of line build up, and I ended up adding different line values when I tattooed it. It's still in progress, when it's done I'll post it.

[White Rose]

the first picture.... alot of the features..are very off....on the face....
eyes way to big ..(width wise) eyes are 5 eyes length on a head..also..the nose.. is off the axis... grab an antomy book (loomis) to see where the features are the face suppose to be...

[sine nomine]

The eyes are drawn larger than life on purpose, not due to lack of anatomical knowlage/referance :-p.

As for the nose, i'm not sure where I should move it. Does this look more correct to you?

http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/sine_deus/snakegirlnewnosecopy.jpg

let me know what you think...