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Eric Gerhard
August 15th, 2006, 09:57 PM
All right guys!

I'm expecting things to improve it. This one I started and finished today.

Peace for everybody!

http://www.gerhardarts.com/desenhos/untitled-4copy.jpg
Ertai
August 15th, 2006, 10:39 PM
Doesn't look finished yet. Which does not mean it looks bad, it looks great. The background confuses my eyes.
daylightNinja
August 16th, 2006, 02:03 AM
I agree with Ertai...the background takes away from the affect of your character (which looks great by the way). Just a suggestion: try adding a bit of a lighter shade around the front arm, especially at the bicep. Right now it's blending in with the torso. otherwise, great. keep it up
Elwell
August 16th, 2006, 02:07 AM
It looks like his tail is growing out of his elbow.
Eric Gerhard
August 16th, 2006, 07:14 AM
I agree with everything you said.

I'll try these things and then I'll post it again.

Thank you a lot guys!
egerie
August 16th, 2006, 01:26 PM
Great dynamic potential. As it was pointed out before in so many words, be careful with tangents that might confuse the viewer. Also the close parallelism of some limbs destroy the flow and make it too structured (left forearm, left thigh).
Clean your colors and edges. It does look like a color study on top of a sketch and not a finished piece.
Eric Gerhard
August 17th, 2006, 07:03 AM
Great dynamic potential. As it was pointed out before in so many words, be careful with tangents that might confuse the viewer. Also the close parallelism of some limbs destroy the flow and make it too structured (left forearm, left thigh).
Clean your colors and edges. It does look like a color study on top of a sketch and not a finished piece.
Sure, Egerie, thanks too.... unfortunately, I can't change the composition because I would have to change the hole thing. As you have said abaout the parallels, my professor have always said this to me at college, and I always forget it, hahahahaha.

It's always good to know that there are people who really care.

I'm going to fix the rest, and sharp some lights and post it again, ok?

Thanks a lot.
Eric Gerhard
August 17th, 2006, 10:48 PM
Well,

Here I come with more changes and the panther cut in different "moments".

Tell me more things because I'm convinced on what I have done.

Peace to you all