Some draws

[Hitsys]

Hello everyone!!!

She is Ainoa, the main character from a new story that I am working in.
What do you think about her:D ?
Any critics:D ?


http://comeol.hosteol.com/~thecragor/Ainoa.jpg








PD: I will like to post the other character when I finish, but I am very busy right now :(

[BluePencilArtist]

She is pretty hot looking babe and for me I don't see anything wrong of her. But I am not sure about others think. Are you planning to coloring in?

[Mindflaw]

"You must be tired like you been running around in my mind" Mindflaw says, just before he gets a kick in the groin.

I like it very much.:)

And just to say something... I get the feeling like she just having here weight on the ground and not any weight where she leans at the wall, but that may just be me.

Yeah and don´t forget to post the other character

[Montross]

Impressive, most impressive Hitsys. I sure hope you color it in. We'll I tried to take a crack at drawing chicks. A couple sketches.http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/153811/model.jpg http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/153811/cristina3.jpg

[Big-Dave]

Hitsys: There doesn't look like there's anything wrong with the figure, but the broken part of the wall seems to be bending out wards strangely not sure why, although it might e something to do with the perspective.

[Hitsys]

Thanks to everyone for you coments :D


Well, I will colour her some day, I guess :D . I was thinking in the light is comign from the top on the right, where is a street lamp ( is out of the draw). But I don't know if this will be right :p Some ideas?

I know I have a terrible problem with the perspective, I don't know nothing about it :( , if someone can help me about it in my draw I will be grateful.

Thanks again
:D

[BluePencilArtist]

Just take your time to color in and there is no rush to finish.....

[Mysen]

very nice linework my friend. very nice indeed.

[ion one]

good work, her face looks like riku from final fantasy 10, good work:D

[Hitsys]

Thanks to everyone.
Now, here it is her best friend :D.
She is Katrina, Kat only for the friends. She is a very, very hot woman, what do you think?
She likes very much use men :D
Any critics?
http://comeol.hosteol.com/~thecragor/KAT.jpg
Enjoy :D

[Erik]

I'll try to give some constructive crit here since nobody does that anymore. Just commenting on what i see.

The last one is much better than the first one. It's really quit well executed. That's a hot chick.

The first one has problems among which: two legs of unequal length (hips are straight, yet one bent leg and one straight reach the floor at about the same spot) and the background is not up to par with the figure.

Chick #2 seems to have a low forehead though or weird hair implant.

Keep it up!

[Gum]

Enhorabuena Hitsys, cada vez eres má mehó! ;)