BluePencil's Sketchbook (Update 6-13-03)

[BluePencilArtist]

I did really quick sketch of village. Done in ballpoint pen and draw on the scratch paper from my work.....
http://www.geocities.com/frisbeegolfen/Drawings/Village1.txt

Cowgirl in blue pencil and took me about hour. I know that she looks kinda funky. I working on my anatomy.......
http://www.geocities.com/frisbeegolfen/Drawings/cowgirl.txt

More update later over weekend.

[Sketch]

ah... nah nevermind

[adien]

really good work. she's a bit naughty hey? :)

some crits:
her left shoulder looks a bit off...
also, the lines for the clothing look good (i suck at clothing), but your shading looks a bit odd. it looks like you've darkened the top of a fold where it should be the lightest in some places. (ie where it looks like the light should be hitting the fold, you've darkened it.) also, the light looks like it should be coming from the right side of the picture, yet there is no shading on the cloth right next to her body on her right arm, beneath her breast (and a few other places).

it looks really good, keep posting! :) :chug:

[BluePencilArtist]

Originally posted by adien
really good work. she's a bit naughty hey? :)

some crits:
her left shoulder looks a bit off...
also, the lines for the clothing look good (i suck at clothing), but your shading looks a bit odd. it looks like you've darkened the top of a fold where it should be the lightest in some places. (ie where it looks like the light should be hitting the fold, you've darkened it.) also, the light looks like it should be coming from the right side of the picture, yet there is no shading on the cloth right next to her body on her right arm, beneath her breast (and a few other places).

it looks really good, keep posting! :) :chug:

Thank you very much for "postive comment" and some crit for cowgirl.

Cowgirl was my really first real life drawing. I was just cruise and free hand drawing that night. I really don't care about her cloth but I did really good on her face. That what I am proud so much and still working on my anatomy too. There no way get first drawing looks really professional. Anyway, I going to take summer drawing class at community college.

Thank you again:chug:

[BluePencilArtist]

UPDATE 6/1/03

Here few more drawings.....

Clown fish with high technology mirco chip inside of brain.
http://www.geocities.com/frisbeegolfen/Drawings/Fish0001.txt

I have no idea where this character I came up from my head or my dream I guess. His name is Squidge and from out space somewhere. Yes, I know that he looks like sperm but not for long. I am working on his bodies.
http://www.geocities.com/frisbeegolfen/Drawings/Squidge0002.txt

Any crits on any those drawings?

[BluePencilArtist]

Not much update here....

http://www.geocities.com/frisbeegolfen/Drawings/trilusplant.txt

Any crits