My Crappy first posts

[Jetsin]

I have been a member for awhile finally decided to post. Here's some of my Artwork that is to be colored whenever i feel like getting around to it
http://www.imagemagician.org/images/jetsin/Untitled-5.jpg

http://www.imagemagician.org/images/jetsin/Girldock.jpg
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http://www.imagemagician.org/images/jetsin/BigComfyCouch.jpg

[BluePencilArtist]

Nice girls you have there.... It would be cooler if you could finish them in colors....

In first drawing, I like girl body at most and her arms is kind look funny.

Keep it up good work and don't give up..........

[DustinTrimble]

Cute girls!
crit: Your perspectives seem a little odd, the dock front looks kinda forced, and the chair in the third looks odd like it isn't quite sitting flat on the floor.

[Phait]

These drawings have great potential to be really nice illustrations when inked - these fem's are sexy! The 2nd one's head is a tad big in my opinion - keep it up!

[Jetsin]

thanks for the comments guys.Bluepencil, I'll get around to color it soonner or later. Hmmm I thought the seconds pic head was too small, Phait I guess it is too big though.
DustinTrimble- how would do you think i could fix the perspective problems?

[ion one]

hey, the last one looks like me in the v.i.p. room.... yea. keep up the good work:chug:

[AndreasM]

Theese aren`t bad at all. Though, mabye you should try out a different paper and some more pencil variations...