Wing Comic -3rd gig

[killerpenguin]

*update*

Here's the finished sketch for my third weekly wing comic. I didn't put many of detail in background 'cuz I want to try things around with colors. I'll post color key tomorrow. Crits, comments, or ideas are highly appreciated. Peace! :confident

[JAG.]

hmm.. well so far its difficult to tell whats goig on, but judging by the women's expressions, they dont seem to like the new girl with wings.. ;) the girl's head is kinda big though.. - JAG

[killerpenguin]

Well I already have a rough idea of the story in mind, but I don't want to ruin it by telling it right off the bat. So keep checking, the composition is a bit complicated but the sketch should be done by today. :)

[JAG.]

i think i see where this is going ;). keep posting - JAG

[killerpenguin]

Rough colors key. I fixed the compo a bit. I'll start rendering soon. :}

[JAG.]

happy endings.. not bad ;) - JAG

[killerpenguin]

Haha, ok spit it out, Jag. What story did you have in mind when you saw the first couple panels? :)

[JAG.]

heh well what i imagined by the first few panels was a sad story... like she got picked on by so many that she cut off her wings or gave them to a fish or somethin.. :D kinda connecting the other strips.. but this works too. besides, how else am i supposed to assume an octopus has a pair of wings sittin around waiting to be purchased?? ;) - JAG

[killerpenguin]

Haha, that would make a nice start for another story, mind if I steal it? :}

As for the last comic, I kinda borrow idea from Disney's little mermaid (-octopus witch selling leg --> octopus mage selling magic wing.) It's hard telling a complete story within such a short comic, but I'm trying my best.

[killerpenguin]

Ok rendering post, I'll keep updating this until i'm done as usual. :pump:

[JAG.]

heh be my guest.. its all yours. the rendering looks nice so far, finish it up already ;) - JAG

[killerpenguin]

Ok, I think it's done for now. Let me know if you think. Next one is coming soon. :^^:

[JAG.]

hmm this rendering is great. why does she and the kid only have one eye?? shed be a lot prettier with two ;) - JAG

[killerpenguin]

Haha, that's what my friend said, too. I prefer 1 eye though, more symbolic that way. I think colors are a bit too flat but I'm going to let it go for now. :nerd:

[Gevik]

looks so cute
cutiepie :D

[killerpenguin]

I know I was aiming for cuteness, but somehow being complimented on it doesn't make me happy... :moon: