woman sketch

[asuryan]

hi!

just started today a sketch of a woman to explore skintones and beauty... ;)
I know that the eyes looking like martin feldman but I´m working on it... its just not finished... :)

So far...

http://www.scriblab.de/temp/conceptart/womansketch_mh.jpg

hope I can post as soon as possible the next version! :)

comments and critics are highly appreciated

Bye, Marius

[JAG.]

heh yeah besides the spooky-ass eyes it looks great. got a very early 70's girl feel about it, i like it. keep workin on it - JAG

[mcetin]

memeleri büyük olmus....

[asuryan]

JAG - Thanks JAG! It seems that you are a very active ca member! :)
mcetin - Thanks too for your comment, but unfortunately I dont understand turkey... Besides german I speak english and a bit french... could you translate your comment please?!

Here is a new version of the woman but It seems that I´m not able to solve the eye problem; it always turns out like she doesn´t look in the same direction... moreover I dont like the expression... looks like jack sparrows "eye-paintover" damn :rolleyes:
Some jewelery work done too...

http://www.scriblab.de/temp/conceptart/womansketch_mh02.jpg

[Bob Todd]

I like the overall soft green colour theme.

The piece suspended from her choker doesn't look as though it's lying on her chest - it almost looks as though the ref lines are holding it up! I don't know how you'd fix that other than tweaking the angle a wee bit.
The jewellery looks a bit heavy compared to her garment. She's just wearing a plain green top, so the jewellery makes her look overdressed. I think she'd look good with lace or frills on her top, 1500s-1600s-style. Or perhaps a gypsy theme would be better. Is that an earring or an earphone? Elizabethan-era woman with headphones could be quite cool (but that's just my opinion).

I think if you moved her left (from our point of view) iris a bit more to the right it would look more as though it was pointing the same way as the right. I don't know if you want her looking in that direction, though. I'm not sure about her eyebrows, either. I'm sorry I can't be more helpful on that front.

I do like this piece and I want to see where it goes.

[JAG.]

her right eye is too far to her right.. movie it more towards her nose. its also in the wrong orientation. we're seeing her from an angle piont of view.. but that eye is looking at us from a head-on frontal view. as for the jewelry, try more shadows and hi-lites. it looks too flat and unreal the way it is now. this should help out your work. looks nice though keep it up. - JAG