long time no post

[poly_cube]

This was done on open canvas- pretty much my first attempt at a cg realism.

curious to hear what you guys think about the colors mostly- some parts I think the skin tone really such and just went completely off. primarly around teh check/ear area.
http://www.caffeineartist.com/drawings/vicki.jpg

[endregan]

facial proportions seem a bit off. eyes crooked in aligntment with rest of face

[old_hank]

Hey poly_cube great job!

Here are some of my thoughts on what you could work on.

The eyes are too far apart. The amount of space between the eyes should equal one eyes width. Hope that makes sense

Also There is not enough contrast going on in value. Her hair should have more variation of tones so that it looks more dimensional.

Last thing. Her shirt has the most contrast in the whole piece which makes the eye go directly to her shirt instead of her face.

Hope this helps. Keep it up!

[old_hank]

Here is a rough idea of what I was talking about.

I hope it helps!

:D

http://www.geocities.com/fwaftica/polycubereconcopy.gif