Golden Wing Fish -2nd comic

[killerpenguin]

Rough rough sketch as usual, though not as rough as my first one. Hope it's understandable. I'll post color key soon. Comments, ideas, crits, plz~! :}

[killerpenguin]

color keys... kinda wanna get that corals color looks. :)

[JAG.]

it works.. just the way your previous comic does. keep going, lets see the finished work. - JAG

PS. got a thing for wings??

[killerpenguin]

It wasn't clear how he got the wing so I fixed it a little bit. Hope it reads better. The color key is still mostly the same, so I'm going to start rendering now. >:D

[killerpenguin]

ps. Ya, I love chicken wings...

[Wilhelm87]

It looks interesting, the fish looks kinda cute for a fish. :P

[killerpenguin]

It's a bit irony i'm doing this one because I'm scared of fish head, especially those tuna type one.

Anyway, here's the rendering version. I'll keep updating this image below until I'm done. Feel free to shoot me a comment anytime. :painting:

[JAG.]

the fish's facial expressions in your line art are superb.. try your best to recapture them the same way in color - JAG

[Chanyah]

watch out the color of the fish in second panel...why it's so dark? Is it gonna be silhouette? be careful though or else it's gonna look like my name.

[killerpenguin]

One word, pupu: "illusion of exposure."
That's where it's so bright outside that everything else got dimmed. Doesn't always work in comic, but I thought I try it out...

Welcome to CA pupu. Thx for gracing me with your first post. <3

[killerpenguin]

Ok, it's done I think (unless you think I should fix something.) I'm really happy with it cuz i was a lot more confidence with colors than the last one. I would really appreciate any comments, crits, or idea for the next one. :bounce:

[JAG.]

heh it looks great. well done killer - JAG

[killerpenguin]

Heheh thx Jag. :}

Actually, I kinda hate the birds. They are so distracting, but I just don't know how to deal with them yet...