Espen art book. update each day :O

[Saterart]

PICTURES, from a new guy!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v697/Espengenin/blackfielddone.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v697/Espengenin/waterspiritlarge.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v697/Espengenin/saturday.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v697/Espengenin/donttouchme2.jpg

and a crappy superman painting :P

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v697/Espengenin/superfigthnobombs.jpg

[boomheadshot45]

very nice, i really like the 1st one and the hand pulling the girls hair, keep up the good work

[softocean]

I recommend that you only post one piece at a time in the critique forum.
Anyway, the figures look like they have a variable level of detail. Take time to find the subtle aspects of anatomy in a forearm, a shin etc. It seems that right now you are missing an opportunity to clarify these parts. If I covered up part of the female character, could I tell that this part was a leg? an arm?
I'm sure that doing some anatomy studies will help clear this up for you.

[Kian]

Hi and welcome to CA :yayca:

Ok, I'm going to be very honest here, but its something I wish I was told when I started the whole digital painting thang.
You need to draw way more!!
I mean hours on end of drawing. You seem to understand colour relativley well. But your line work needs a helluva lot of work. Study anatomy for hours! It may sound hard, but its actually incredibly interesting and and hour a day will fly by! You'll also see an immediate increase in your skill level if you do.
I'll recommend Hogarth's Dynamic anatomy. Buy it! dont even hesistate!

I think your concepts are pretty interesting; and that with some studying, you'll be able to achieve that image in your head perfectly to paper/screen ;)

[Konstruktion]

I think you should look over the anatomy and proportions. Haha, I know, the most boring answer ever, but... download Loomis books. And practise! Maybe it's better to concentrate on your pencils before color?