WIP comic strip 16

[JERI]

Work in progress. In the mean time, do you get the joke? Anything else you have to say is greatly appreciated.

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2439/comic2006kt7.jpg

[Pixeldragoon]

I get it :D I giggled too! This is good :D

[robrov21]

Holy s. I giggled like a little giiirl. Realy funny...ha ha ha..no, wait you sick f%$#!

Lol, nice style, poses and facial expressions really tell the story. I think clean inks will clear up the joke's intention, especially with those picture bubbles up top. I still don't know what's going on in the conffetti bubble..or is that one of those money whirlwinds radio stations have you get into? But after I saw the soccer and the beach etc, I got it.

[JERI]

pixeldragon Heh thanks dood :).
robrov21Hopefully once I rubbed away the pencil lines, things will clear up a little. That bubble is actually meant to be people rock climbing. I've had my friends saying that it looks like they're dancing in a money rain as well. Do you think coloring them black or shading them will make them more like rock climbing pieces?

Thanks for input. I was actually half worried that it maybe a little too cryptic to get immediately.

[EDIT]Btw, do you guys think I should add some other cars in the 4th panel looking for parking spaces as well?

[JERI]

Update:
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9338/comic2006013cc7.jpg

[swizec]

Took a while to get it, really need to pay attention to details to understand the joke lol.

Funny as hell... you sick sick bastard.

[robrov21]

the fourth panel would have more cars by default, just need to check your perspective on that one, I've posted a lil' paint over to demonstrate (sorry about totally butchering your car, but my cintiq is in the shop and I suck at drawing on a 6X8 wacom tablet..yek!). All I did was take your row of cars from the left and flip and skew them to get the row on the right.

It looks good inked, I dunno what to do to clear up the confusion on the rock wall...maybe choose something different, or instead of an artificial wall, have them climbing actual rock. Tha texture of a real cliff may make that panel more obvious.

[evildisco]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA so evil it's funny, nice one Jeri.

[killerpenguin]

Really cute, made me laughed too.

:)

[Infinit]

wow that is so mean
real black humor, I like it :)

imo rorov21 is right about the cars

... man that's mean

[Tomato]

clever and i like the idea :D funny as well ^^