first 3 characters in steampunk story

[pazshadow]

these are 3 characters from a steampunk like story im writing and illustrating. picture this- a domineering church that rules a land full of celts and gypsies( slavic type ppl), controlling church land with huge machines powered by child eunochs, called cherubim war chambers. the church is in conflict with a romanesque empire called the phyraaqn empire.the phyraan's allies are the cheruschites, an etrusco-greek culture. throw in assassins, choirs of angels and legions of hell, with sum heroic gypsy children who change the fate of a world, and youve got my basic premise.this pic shows three of these characters_ a church assassin, a chrubim war chamber( will have more armor) and a cheruschite warrior
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/medieval/a_few_characters.jpg
you can see the cherubim concept idea in the sketches section under cherubim war chamber:D

[darkcult]

. Girl looks realy good.
Monster’s left shoulder is too big( Me think).... or is it a certain perspective that You tried to achieve?
Nice colours.
Apart from few anatomic things,
in general …good stuff!;)

[pazshadow]

well, hes supposed to have huge shoulders. ya the cherubim does have sum anatomical mistakes.. and i wanted to add more armor plates after. ah well:chug:

[pazshadow]

will have more concepts up in next few days

[brads3d]

Looks pretty good. You could get a little more action if you put in some poses or perspective angles, and you could get some bang out of the color by adjusting the brightness in different areas.