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Maerrick
July 25th, 2006, 02:19 AM
hey guys...Just painting in greyscale. ill be adjusting some of the anatomy (which i should've done at the base sketch =/)...but any c&c will be appreciated.

-maerrick

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f301/Maerrick/Podentiae-1.jpg
Maerrick
July 25th, 2006, 02:40 AM
kinda fixed...
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f301/Maerrick/Podentiae2.jpg
JAG.
July 25th, 2006, 08:48 AM
the posture looks good, lower the knees some, they're too high. her head and neck look disproportionate.. either the heads too small or the neck is too wide, or maybe a bit of both. the rest looks good. finish it up - JAG
Maerrick
July 25th, 2006, 03:27 PM
heres a little update, things were slightly change but the knees haven't been touched yet. if the knees are high still please say so.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f301/Maerrick/Podentiaecopy321.jpg
JAG.
July 25th, 2006, 05:08 PM
hmm cant see the old pic to compare exactly what was changed, but it does look better. her left knee though could be lowered just a bit.. - JAG
sweetoblivion314
July 25th, 2006, 10:31 PM
some of the folds in her clothes look like they are razor sharp. Her left arm is way to thin and her left boob is off.
Serena-
July 26th, 2006, 01:11 AM
agree with last crit... but also I do really like the concept, and the gray scale values. I think it'll be awesome when finished. Keep sharing your progression:D
Elwell
July 26th, 2006, 02:05 AM
Her head is tiny, and it's throwing everything else off. I've superimposed an eight head grid on her, along with a quick redline. Besides the proportions, the biggest problem is that everything is so stiff.
JAG.
July 26th, 2006, 05:42 AM
^ excellent dissection - JAG
Maerrick
July 26th, 2006, 07:50 PM
thanks for all the response, i really do appreciate them! because of this, i have decided to take off her clothes so i can focus on the more important stuff.
Maerrick
July 27th, 2006, 05:26 AM
i'm pretty certain i know what i want to do with that left arm. Its not the exact gesture, its just that i got a little tired =/
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f301/Maerrick/f4dsa864fds654f56ds.jpg
JAG.
July 27th, 2006, 06:59 AM
much better plan. you should always begin with the general foundation and build up from it as in anything else.. keep it up - JAG
Dave_Lynch
July 27th, 2006, 07:12 AM
its a shame im coming in on this only after the initial pics have been broken but what i see i like. i can see this progressing into something interesting. from what you have so far though i kind of expect thos floating orbs to have some amount of radiance on her body.

good work so far though