2 Sketches

[z3r0]

Here r 2 sketches on wich Im working on right now.

1: Im not sure if Im gonna finish this, its the first concept for a couple of chars for a story im working on, I just drew whatever popped up in my mind.
http://forum.unknownnet.com/upload/att_620fb107f735f288671c21818599b52bBla.jpg

2: This one Im gonna finish, its a character for a fic a friend of mine is working on.
http://forum.unknownnet.com/upload/att_017ca893e1eb106d5ecb5fa1f551241fBla2.jpg

Crits are welcome :)

[BluePencilArtist]

Can't wait to see that second drawing finish in color. I like that one at most than first drawing.......:)

[Carnifex]

the second roxx big times!
just three things
1:make her right upper arm a bit thicker
2:her left foot looks odd
3:her right looks flat
...work on feet generally
no other crits there:D