Orc Bowman

[njo]

i sketched this up real quick and i wanted to know you thoughts/helpfull advice. Thanks in advance to those who respond.

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/2816/orcbowmancopyyv4.jpg

[Tacritan]

hi
its a nice sketch i think, if i were you i'd put the eyes closer to each other, and maybe focus more on the shading of the pulled-out jaw(?). Maybe avoid pressing so hard while doing the lines, such as the eye-socket lines which is to marked out in my opinion. More shadow around the eyes to make a feeling of sunk-in eyes, its feels orcish to me:). Good quick sketch tho, i cant say much more :)