portrait (oil)

[yAdam]

I've done this portrait as a present for a couple of friends who are getting married. I just got them to watch tv while I did some premilinary stuff and thought it was quite nice to have them in that particular pose, instead of something more formal. Would be great to hear some opinions and crits about this as its just been sat in my room for ages and its hard for me to look at it properly anymore.. Cheers!!

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[v0rbiss]

Very good job overall, but i have 2 small crits. His right arm(the one behind the woman) looks longer than it should be, and the highlights in the man's hair don't look good to me, can't tell you exactly why tho... :^^;:

[Sirkenneth]

I agree about the arm. its defnitly too long-but thats not too bad. i think the hiar just needs a little bit more in some areas. right now it looks kinda greasy.The clothing looks amazing-i like that alot! I love how there expresions are totaly zoned-looks like they are watching tv. good job!