my first image

[waldi]

hallo everybody
its done my first digital painting.done in photoshop and cinema 4d.

hope you like it. please tell me what i can do better.:bashful:

http://www.newfinest.com/concept/laboratory.jpg

[Rhynome]

The only real problem I can find is that the reflection in the floor does't quite match that of the doorframe.

Also the pillars seem to be a few degrees out due to the lines at the joins, it's minor but could do with some tweaking. The second and third joins up, not the ones at the bottom. I'm also not a great fan of the 'glare' at the bright spots on the lights, I think they should just be whiter or more of it present. They look brighter when I ignore the glare effect so just doing away with them, or making them slightly smaller would work fine.

Other than that I really like it, but the lack of doorframe in the reflection is bugging me.

[sleep]

the distortion in the reflection isn't really necessary, and makes the floor look like water. just make it a clear reflection

http://sean.gunsha.com/junk/paintover/lab.jpg
that looks a lot cleaner and gives a better impression of a smooth techno-lab flooring

[dogfood]

Are the little light strips projecting light on the floor? If those are reflections of the light, it's not how it works.

[waldi]

Thanks a lot for your dedication and for posting so fast.
i know that the reflection on the floor are defective it realy looks like water. i will change that.