Zhiwang -*Sketchbook*-

[Zhiwang]

Hi all!

I will post my starts in digital painting in this sketchbook.
Crit. and coms are always welcome!

I am not an artist at all but i hope you ll enjoy my lil stuffes :) later when i ll be more skilled :P

So let's go!

(some of these first works have already been posted, in others sections, sorry for that :) )

http://img469.imageshack.us/img469/917/magemw7.jpg
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3800/dolmengo4.jpg
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/796/poulpe2gn0.jpg
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/531/forestspeedpaintingfinalga9.jpg

[Dile_]

Acctually I think it have some potential to be nice, but
you really gotta put away your brushes, keep to the orignal ones
to you get a hang of it..right now your useing bumskee's brushes
on a quite horrible way.... alittle there, and a little there, and a litther at this place.. you should have a thought behind every brush stroke ;)
( uhm sorry if I sound harsh, Im just trying to help )
I think it would be nice to see some Pencil stuff!
And keep it up! you can only be better ;)

[Zhiwang]

AHAH :D owned.

You are right!!
but i am sorry...i don t have any idea how to do leaves quick and good.

If i think behind every brush strokes it will take me years to make one enviro, cos i don t know how to make a good texture :s with a simple brush.

I have no scanner to show you pencils stuffes, but i will make somes with a small brush.^^

Thank you for your crit!!! very much!
I will keep it up!

[Zhiwang]

And i said to myself...

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8807/heheov0.jpg

[Dile_]

I dunno whatever to laugh or cry, I tried to help, but instead you
made me feel like that little green guy....

[Zhiwang]

I dunno whatever to laugh or cry, I tried to help, but instead you
made me feel like that little green guy....

Cos, YOU are this lil green guy hehe :teeth:
No it s ok!:confident

So,As i keep it up, this is some classical stuffes.
Really quick made.

basics.
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/7514/attitudegw0.jpg
Classic.
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/4546/attitude2jq1.jpg
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/1818/attitude3ot8.jpg

[Hyptosis]

Dile, dude, you were fine, and took the time to post a long piece of feedback. You're fine.

Zhiwang, don't take it personal. You've got some better stuff towards the end, keep at it. Do EVERYTHING, don't be afraid of anything. Just jump in, and if someone gets you down, turn it around. If they say you suck, proove them wrong. Of course no one said you suck. Now draw like a madman and remember that water rolls off a duck's back, so should comments that bother an artist. You know he meant well, and was doing good in his feedback.

[Dile_]

lol, however nice figures
likeing this http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/4546/attitude2jq1.jpg
really nice! keep it up :) feel free to visit my sketchbook as well ;)

[Zhiwang]

@hyptosis: Sure i know!

I have always know his crit. like a constructive one,
my skills make me mad, not Dile :)

I know he did good in his feedback no matter with that.:yayca:

Cheers dudes.

@Dile, thank you!, i have already see your sketchbook more than one time, i will let ya a word.
Cheers.

[Hyptosis]

Awesome guys, this makes me happy. Great work to both of you, he for leaving a good crit, and you for continuing your work with a hardened shell. Keep it up. =]

[Zhiwang]

Morning doodles
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/9238/mornin1ja1.jpg

[Dile_]

Nice one, I like the horse and the robot head, well, I like the robot
head concept in general :) keep it up :)

[Zhiwang]

envi, Round brushes ;)!!! and a texture selfmade.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5249/env1yr3.jpg

It can be stronger i think!!

[Zhiwang]

So let s make a stronger quicky!

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/9427/env2df4.jpg

[Dile_]

Hey I acctually like this one!
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5249/env1yr3.jpg
That one has potential and a nice mood! keep it up :)

[Zhiwang]

Hey I acctually like this one!
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5249/env1yr3.jpg
That one has potential and a nice mood! keep it up :)

Thx!, do you think i should work more on it?
Or keep that way, and make others like that??

Here s a take off.
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/5273/takeoffrd9.jpg

[Dile_]

I would love too see other paintings doen at teh same way, this
new one is completley different, and it doesnt look as good as the one I pointed out before ;) however, great to see you are active! really nice!

Keep it up, hehe I dont need to say that more to ya :}

[Zhiwang]

New one, in the same way.
Hope you like!

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6404/env3mv2.jpg

EDit: I should try to put more details.

[Zhiwang]

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3294/crappyladertn1.jpg

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7917/warrior1ps0.jpg

Okay...it need more structures, i must use more opacity when i start working, Thx Dile for this "tips".

The next one will have.

[Zhiwang]

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8567/env5copie3ym1.jpg

Crappy...
Please i need crits to improve!!

[Dile_]

wow that last one is awsome! and the robotwarrior as well , awsome
you have improved alot in one day :O keep that up and I be seing you at the
topartist list in a mater of weeks ;) no seriously, keep working you getting better! :)

[Zhiwang]

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/320/env6speedpmoutainsqh2.jpg

Quick done, trying to make a good rocks textures.

Edit: thank you bro!!

[Zhiwang]

Blessed...
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4384/blessedhk3.jpg

I should did him more thick perhaps, and work more on the left arm (closer).

What do you think about?

[Zhiwang]

mh...all these many critics motivate me…:(

[Blue]

As posted before, these have potiontial. I can see that you have a great sense of passion in your work, as well as comedy (hah).

Just don't be afraid to dedicate more time to them, and to redo them, over and over, and to work until they look like polished gems. My biggest complaint is you are moving onto the next sketch way too fast. A lot, if not most, should get a least triple the amount of attention you gave them.

Again, lots of potential, just buckle down and make one look fabulous, instead of trying to mass produce sketches. One amazing one is better then a dozen mediocre ones. :)

[Dile_]

Nice all your stuff is qute cool, you should try to push it a little further! :)
keep it up my friend would love to see some pencils! :)


~Dile

[Zhiwang]

@ Lord Blue :You are right! i must take more time to make one and i will!
@Dile :Yah bro, but i don t have a scanner :P

Thanks for the kinds words.