.:: Lame train station ::.

[Ramucho]

Hi there! :hatsoff:

This is my first art pimpage! And my first env art too!
I myself know that there are a lot of problems with this piece but I'd like to get as many C&Cs as possible.
Post (...only if you want)everything you think that's necessary for someone that's almost a total noob at making art (me :x ) so be...bring it on!! >:D

http://aycu21.webshots.com/image/860/1574040679823386308_rs.jpg


:ar::aa::am::a!:

[Serena-]

I like it.. seems like something needs to be added, but not sure what. Either way nice job with bringing the light into the picture, especially with the make shift glare near the train very realistic capture of how life happens. But why'd you call it 'lame'? :X

[Cookiedough]

It's actually pretty nice. Wish this was a bigger picture.

Be careful with the greys/blacks in the shadows, don't overdo that, else your picture will look 'dead'. Don't forget some nice reflections/ faces in the windows of the train. Needs more humans, birds and birdpoo and/or some cool logo/graffiti on the train.

No need to bring yourself down. Keep posting, keep updating, keep creating art. Only way to level up. :)

Might be helpful:
http://itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm
http://www.worqx.com/color/

[johanson]

Good start. An added human element would be very nice. Start thinking about what you want the focus of the piece to be. What's the story? What do you want the viewer to get out of it?

later,
-andrew