almost finished..armored monster

[Killer Napkins]

im workin on this right now.. i wanna put a weapon in his right hand but im not sure what to put.. a gun or sword.. if u have anyidea or if u see anything wrong with it tell me please..

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/armored_monster_unfinished.jpg

[Killer Napkins]

gun or sword?

[Payback]

How about a gun-sword? :D

[Killer Napkins]

gun-sword u say?.. hmm maybe. u see anything that would help this pic look better? besides finishing it:rolleyes:

[Payback]

Well his abdominal muscles looks too twisted in comparison to his pelvis (if an armoured monster has a pelvis :p) and chest. His head seems like it's bending towards the right a bit too much.... maybe.

Anyhoo, finish it! I'd really like to see it completed.

Later.

[Dementist]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! It's a Zealot! I know it is! Um... sorry for that outburst. i apologize.

Anyway, if you haven't played Starcraft, give it a forearm-mounted beam sword. It'd also open up some cool posibilities for lighting effects, if you feel like doing something like that.

[Killer Napkins]

HEH yea ive played starcraft but i wasnt even thinking of a zealot at the time.. but its not a zealot.. just some monster man i did.. thanks!

[Killer Napkins]

:eek:

[anakin78z]

Hey,

I think it's a cool image, but I don't think it's quite dynamic enough. The pose just doesn't have enough energy, and I don't think adding the gun will do the trick. I think that moving the right foot further out will give the character more balance, and will help with the movement of the body. The head position needs work too. It doesn't look agressive enough.

Hope that helps :eat:

-Jens

[Killer Napkins]

well the problem with moving the foot out is that its right at the bottom of the page.. :( .. but next picture that i will draw ill make a more energetic character.. i know what u mean.. thanks

[gasmask]

nice idea, the main thing that gets to me is it seems you are spending to much time in details, keep it light and loose a little longer to get a good pose and the form alltogether and vary the line quality, alot of ur lines are to uniform, plus alot of time value can define a line.

[Killer Napkins]

thanks.. lol i got a little too anxious on the shading.. i see what ur saying and ill work on what ur saying next time .. thanks!

[espygate]

I think its kind of cramed on the page, but if you provided a background of some sort you could insert meaning. as for the weapon I would like to see some magical / nuclear type thing smashing / stabbing into the ground.

[Killer Napkins]

no its not rerally crammed.. its just cropped liek that.. lol ..bu t ive already got the thing i want on him done.. which is a huge gun.. but now ll i have to do is shade it.. is been sitting there for awhile.. im lazy