---The Jacket --UPDATED with more progress

[kennygeeze]

Hello,
I saw this movie last summer, and I liked it so much I planned on doing a piece with some of the characters just for practice. Never really got around it until now.

Here's the newest version.. scroll down to see in progress work. I think I'm almost done?

http://www.kenmccuen.com/graphics/critique/July%2027%202006/thejacketfinished1.jpg

http://www.kenmccuen.com/graphics/critique/July%2014%202006/thejacket.jpg

Critiques welcome and of course it's not done.

Thanks

Ken

[softocean]

hope you're working in layers, it'll be easier to correct later
his head looks abnormally large to me compared to hers- maybe she's a kid? I didn't see the movie.

[kennygeeze]

SoftOcean,
I see what you're saying, but it's really just supposed to be a montage of the main characters... they don't occupy a realistic space or anything. I am working in layers, but they aren't organized enough to enlarge/shrink specific characters.

Thanks though.


I've been working alot the past few days but I had a few minutes to work on this last night so I made a few changes and started cleaning certain things up. I think I'm going to re-do her striped pajamas... they don't look right to me.

http://www.kenmccuen.com/graphics/critique/july%2019%202006/the%20jacket2%20copy.jpg

[kennygeeze]

http://www.kenmccuen.com/graphics/critique/July%2027%202006/thejacketfinished1.jpg

I don't know if it's my browser or what, but I'm having trouble getting it to appear in the top image. Oh well... here is the almost done version.

any help would be appreciated.

Ken