Flesh Cave

[Grimlohk]

http://home.attbi.com/~grimlohk/oralcave-4CA.jpg

Suggestions / Criticism greatly appreciated

This is a work in progress. I havent worked much in color, and this is an experimental piece im working on.
I was trying to stay away from absolute blacks or whites, but it has made the picture feel monotone.
It is supposed to be a mouth/cave place. The light is supposed to be coming from the far right.
I think i screwed the perspective up though.
Also does anyone have any good tips on how to do water reflections?

[WildSpruceMoose]

Well you may already be planning this, but some reds and pinks would give it more of a fleshy feel. Compisition-wise, I'd put something in to balance out that fleshy protrustion in the forgeground.