Fingering the Matrix (oops, image back)

[tegehel]

Oops, the image was gone for a while. It's back now....

I wanted to color an old sketch. I had no idea what to do, so I did that.

Any comments?

(I don't there I have an explanation on why I did it...aside from a warped mind.)

C.

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/colors/the_wrong_matrix.jpg

[Kortez]

nice work, but I've got 2 crits and a tip

in the matrix it isn't chinese calligraphy (just a pointer-you might have the calligraphy to hold hands with the fact that her dagger looks very middle east - I don't know :))

but to the crits, her left foot is somewhat bent underneath that sheet covering her, makes it look detached or something :)

her left arm (the finger one) looks also somewhat detached.

Just wanted to let you know of what I saw, other than that it's a good piece, you just keep posting and posting, one great piece after the other :)

Regards,
Kortez
fan of the lightrator :D

[tegehel]

thanks for the pointers.

yeah, I'm aware it's not Japanese or Chinese (Kanji in any case) in the Matrix. That title is a working title anyway, I'll probably find a better one once this goes in the finished section.

I'm gonna fix that boot and that arm (I'm not sure I understand 100% what you mean by detached but I do see problems with them now that you mention it).

Thanks.

C.

PS: hehehe, lightrator! :D

[tegehel]

above is the updated version. Slight changes, more colors. I don't want to spend too much time on that one, but I would welcome more comments or ideas. Thanks.

C.