View Full Version : My "landscape" piece for my art class...
rarmstrong5
July 12th, 2006, 09:12 AM
It's just something a little different I guess.http://www.armrobdesign.com/readit.jpg
KawizradSaddrax
July 12th, 2006, 09:38 AM
Interesting! Nothing personal, I honestly don’t like it much, but it seems to be well done for what it is. It makes me dizzy. I think that’s the point though. A few ideas to make it better: label the window. Get rid of any overlapping text. In real life you can’t see the sky through the walls of a house, so where the house is, you should remove the sky text behind it. I’m a bit confused about the right side of the house, try using the “Justify” command on your text, and it will even out all your edges, so the out side of the wall will be flat rather then being all over the place. I like the sky gradient! It does seem a bit generic, so maybe switch out some of the colors. I think this could turn out really bad ass if you added a CRAZY amount of detail to it. Example.. Add power lines, details on the side of the house such as a door, and siding, Roof tiles? A chimney, a sidewalk, people, pets, more plants, ect… Check out this site for a few other ideas. http://www.glassgiant.com/ascii/ Good luck!
/weller
Egets
July 12th, 2006, 12:27 PM
Hey great idea, I once also started doing some portrait from just alphabets but got discouraged when they were not going in order I wanted them to go it was too much work I quess I need to have some more patience :D
I love most especially how in the sky the hue changes very powerful effect, Im with kavizradsakkrads about doing it in more details
Navi
July 12th, 2006, 04:16 PM
that is very very nice... SWEET!!! I love how it pops out and seems to be 3D to some point. Great Job. The sun looks a little junky though... maybe spread it out a bit more like the tree. Just some thoughts. Other wise great work.
jfwalls
July 12th, 2006, 06:51 PM
I remember these types of assignments from typography class. Post a smaller version also so we can see what it looks like from a distance.
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