Arg!

[danica]

Yo ho maitees...Here's a pirate dude sketch i did last night entirely drawn with ball point pen, besides a major lack of rendering with the pen... feel free to comment :) i'm open to everything


http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j116/danica_brine/captain.jpg

[Tiki Snakes]

The feather is a little obviously bent to fit into the picture, I think. It looks clearly broken. Similarly, I'd say the area I have most problem with is his hat, i'm unsure of whether it looks quite right or not.

The rest of the picture seems to have turned out rather well, if you ask me. I like the eyes and how you handled his jacket's details rather a lot, in particular.

[danica]

Hey thanx Tiki, yeah the feather is suposed to be broken, but yes it was made so it would fit on to the page. >:| and the hat is off...the left part is smaller than the right lol. ah well, i like it even though it's faulty:) thanx again eh !