new pic

[LjK_89]

i was unsure about puttin this up in the finished section but its about the most finished piece i've done in a long time, so here goes

first the lineart in pencil:

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y140/LjK_89/lineart1.jpg

now the watercoloured version:

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y140/LjK_89/trooper1.jpg

any crits or suggestions are welcome im eager to improve on my colouring technique.
i was wondering about putting in some darker shadow areas what do you guys think?


thanks

[Doomgriever]

surely not FF section!. anyways.
he is holding the schyte (however its spelled) too loosly, i mean, its heavier than a banana 0__o so he would surely drop it if he held it like that, make a stronger grip!

the coloring is ok but it seems to me that u picked a base color, and a shadow color, but no really light source color? /: i think this piece needs it.
and most important of all!!! where is the bakground? :) not fun running around in nothingness now is it =)