Valtier - First Post

[Silenz]

So hi this is my first contribution to this awesome site :bashful: (ghehe) .. so i wanted to show you this painting i've been working on ..

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3521/wipfull38gp.jpg

So yeah tell me what you think of it .. thanks!

[Biff Proton]

It looks very nice so far. But something seems a little off with the anatomy. I think his arms and torso are kinda small compared to his rather broad chest and shoulders. Perhaps making them bulkier will make the body look more balanced. Other than that, it's lovely. :)

[Silenz]

I'm going to experiment with that soon .. but i had a little time so i made an adjustment with the hair and shirt .. :^^:

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3586/wipfull41wd.jpg

[Silenz]

So well now i've decided to paint it further .. and this time he has a more stabile pose

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9493/wipfull5vb6.jpg

Is this better?