my very first piece

[iwon35]

http://www.wonchoi.com/portfolio/gx03a.jpgsorry... It's little big....

[Crash]

my first.....my ass it is.

your metal renderings is pritty damn impressive, and that concept itself it DAMN impressive :beer:

[ill`Be]

pants on fire :D

[egerie]

The legs and the eye thing are awesome! I liked the red you put in there but it's all over the place.. Oh and one tiny little thing ; there may be some perspective issues with the gun

[Erik]

very nice -- would be nicer if it were scaled to max 800 width though... ;-)

I like the mech but the metal rendering on the gun is different from that on the mech, looks like it's not the mech's gun. Maybe up the 'chunkyness' of the gun, it seems so thin.

And the feet could be more in style too.

But it's a damn cool concept and great work!

[I.was.ink]

Nice!:)

I think you mean first post, not first painting. Cuz if it is, then boy do I suck! ;)

[iwon35]

I meant... my very first post here in conceptart.org.... sorry

I didn't want to have same look of the metal on both mecha and the gun. I intended to show that gun uses lighter metal material than mecha which I think I've achieved in this painting.

Q:how do you upload your icon to show underneth your id..?
or noobies like me don't have that option..?

Thanks!!!

[blackhand]

Very neat concept. The head is especially interesting. Some comments, though, to help you elevate the piece:

The large type element on the left is a bit large. It's nearly the same size as the figure and really doesn't need to be.

The rendering on the gun is too clean and sharp--it's incongruous with the 'rough' rendering on the figure. Mainly I'm talking about the linework you used to outline the gun.

The 'tusks' on the side of the figure's head look uneven.

The box on the figure's left shoulder doesn't really fit in. It looks like a blow dryer or something to me. The shape of it doesn't fit in with the other interesting forms in the design.

I think you need a little more texture in the midsection. The area there is a bit flat and sticks out from the nice texture work you have on the other parts of the figure. I can understand if you wanted to imply different materials, but it doesn't make sense for that one area to be pristine while the rest of the body is battle worn.

This is a really good piece, and I'd like to see you push it even further.

[Loga4]

Indeed very nice piece,iwon35.
Post more,please.