Dragonsback Revisited 2

[tegehel]

Here's the reworked piece:

. tilted head slightly inward
. made the back leg more obvious
. darken the armor's shadows

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/colors/dragonsback_sm.JPG

and details:

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/colors/dragonsback.JPG

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[chriswahl]

Awesome!

Looking at it- There's something awkward about the head and chest...I think it's because the tilt of her head is in line with her back and it makes her look a bit stiff and rigid. Maybe bring the head left a bit.

Also I think you have to darken the armour more (like the rock in the foreground), because the browns of the hair and the reds of the cape seem to overpower it.


Besides that, beautiful work. The background looks fantastic.

[foster]

sweet! love the long composition.

i am having a problem finding her far leg. not sure how she is sitting. but i like the rest of the painting mucho.

jon

[tegehel]

Thanks guys, now that you mention it, I see those problems too...(I need your eyes!)

:D

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[tegehel]

new fixes done. Comments?

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[Spacemonkey]

you seem to have posted alot of work recently and I've enjoyed it all. :D

[chriswahl]

Much better...

Great stuff!:cool:

[MindCandyMan]

you rock tegehel...you are pumping this stuff out too man! Awesome! It looks great.

[Wynd]

I like the symbolism between the moutain and the character vs. the clouds and the cape. Very cool vertical composition!

[behemot5]

:cry:

[I.was.ink]

U don't see a lot of vertical comps. Very nice, I love the red scarf.

This rocks :rock: